Improve design pages

3 files changed, 10 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/src/templates/coins-designs-at.html.tmpl b/src/templates/coins-designs-at.html.tmpl
index e58865e..da9cd67 100644
--- a/src/templates/coins-designs-at.html.tmpl
+++ b/src/templates/coins-designs-at.html.tmpl
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 </header>
 <main>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The Austrian euro coins can be grouped into three different themes. The bronze coins feature Austrian flowers, the gold coins feature Austrian architecture, and the bimetalic coins feature famous Austrian people. All coins also feature an Austrian flag as well as the coins denomination. These coins together with the {Link:l}Greek euro coins{-:E} are the only coins that feature the denomination on both the common and national sides of the coin."
+		{{ .Get "The Austrian euro coins can be grouped into three different themes. The bronze coins feature Austrian flowers, the gold coins feature Austrian architecture and the bimetalic coins feature famous Austrian people. All coins also feature an Austrian flag as well as the coins denomination. These coins together with the {Link:l}Greek euro coins{-:E} are the only coins that feature the denomination on both the common and national sides of the coin."
 		(map "Link" "gr") }}
 	</p>
 
@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@
 		<img alt="{{ .Get `Austrian €0.50 coin` }}" src="/designs/at-050-1.avif">
 	</div>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The €0.10 coin features St. Stephen’s Cathedral. It symbolises the Viennese Gothic architectural style dating to around the year 1160. The €0.20 coin features Belvedere Palace. This is an example of Baroque architecture and symbolises the national freedom and sovereignty of Austria. The final gold coin — the €0.50 coin — features the Secession Building: an exhibition hall in the Art Nouveau style." }}
+		{{ .Get "The €0.10 coin features St. Stephen’s Cathedral. It symbolises the Viennese Gothic architectural style dating to around the year 1160. The €0.20 coin features Belvedere Palace. This is an example of Baroque architecture and symbolises the national freedom and sovereignty of Austria. Finally, the €0.50 coin features the Secession Building: an exhibition hall in the Art Nouveau style." }}
 	</p>
 	<div class="design-container">
 		<img alt="{{ .Get `Austrian €1 coin` }}" src="/designs/at-100-1.avif">
 		<img alt="{{ .Get `Austrian €2 coin` }}" src="/designs/at-200-1.avif">
 	</div>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The two bimetallic coins feature the busts of the musical composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozarts on the €1 coin, and the Austrian pacifist and Nobel Peace Prize winner Bertha von Suttner." }}
+		{{ .Get "The two bimetallic coins feature the busts of the musical composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart on the €1 coin, and the Austrian pacifist and Nobel Peace Prize winner Bertha von Suttner on the €2 coin." }}
 	</p>
 </main>
 {{ end }}
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diff --git a/src/templates/coins-designs-be.html.tmpl b/src/templates/coins-designs-be.html.tmpl
index e57d0cb..618c2e4 100644
--- a/src/templates/coins-designs-be.html.tmpl
+++ b/src/templates/coins-designs-be.html.tmpl
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <h1>{{ .Get "Belgian Euro Coin Designs" }}</h1>
 </header>
 <main>
+	<!-- TODO: 2008 has a slightly different portrait. Can we document it? -->
     <div class="design-container">
         <img
 			alt="{{ .Get `Belgian €1 coin (King Albert; Series 1)` }}"
@@ -27,10 +28,10 @@
 		(map "Link" "https://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Royal_cypher") }}
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "In 2008 a second series of coins was released featuring a slightly modified design in which the royal monogram was moved to the inner portion of the coin along with the year of mintage in order to comply with the European Commission’s guidelines. The country code ‘BE’ was also added to the design underneath the royal monogram." }}
+		{{ .Get "In 2008 a second series of coins was released featuring a slightly modified design in which the royal monogram was moved to the inner portion of the coin along with the year of mintage in order to comply with the European Commission’s guidelines. The country code ‘BE’ was also added to the design underneath the royal monogram. The 2008 redesign also saw the use of a slightly modified portrait of the King, but this design change was reverted in 2009." }}
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "After his accession to the throne, Belgium began a third series of coins in 2014 featuring the portrait of King Philippe. As is customary with coins bearing the portraits of monarchs, the direction in which the portrait faces was flipped to face right instead of left." }}
+		{{ .Get "After his accession to the throne in 2014, Belgium switched to a third series of coins featuring the portrait of King Philippe. As is customary with coins bearing the portraits of monarchs, the direction in which the portrait faces was flipped from the prior series to face right instead of left." }}
 	</p>
 </main>
 {{ end }}
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diff --git a/src/templates/coins-designs-de.html.tmpl b/src/templates/coins-designs-de.html.tmpl
index 0a7b677..37e03a5 100644
--- a/src/templates/coins-designs-de.html.tmpl
+++ b/src/templates/coins-designs-de.html.tmpl
@@ -51,13 +51,14 @@
 	</table>
 
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The bronze coins display an oak twig which is similar to the one found on the former Pfennig coins from the German Mark. The mint mark and year are located on the left- and right-hand sides of the stem." }}
+		{{ .Get "The 1c, 2c and 5c coins display an oak twig similar to that found on the former Pfennig coins of the German Mark (Germany’s pre-Euro currency). The mint mark and year are located on the left- and right-hand sides of the oak twig’s stem." }}
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The gold coins feature the Brandenburg Gate, a symbol of Berlin and Germany as a whole, but also a symbol of German division and unity. The mint mark is located below the year." }}
+		{{ .Get "The 10c, 20c and 50c coins feature the Brandenburg Gate, a symbol of Berlin and of Germany as a whole, but also a symbol of German division and unity. The mint mark is located below the year." }}
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		{{ .Get "The bimetallic coins feature an interpretation of the German Federal Eagle (German: ‘{GermanStart:r}Bundesadler{GermanEnd:E}’). The eagle is a common motif in German heraldry — including in the German coat of arms — and represents strength and freedom. The mint mark is located to the right of the year." $deargs }}
+		{{ .Get "The €1 and €2 coins feature an interpretation of the German Federal Eagle (German: ‘{GermanStart:r}Bundesadler{GermanEnd:E}’). The eagle is a common motif in German heraldry — including in the {Link:L}German coat of arms{-:E} — and represents strength and freedom. The mint mark is located to the right of the year."
+		(map "Link" "https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coat_of_arms_of_Germany") $deargs }}
 	</p>
 	<p>
 		<!-- TODO: Get a picture of the edge-inscription -->